Book Editing Services

★★★★★

I was looking for manuscript evaluation of a multi volume work of fiction. Ariane eyed my humble wheelbarrow stuffed with struts, sheet metal, lumpy threaded bits flecked with oil and rust. “I see wings in there,” said she. That has made all the difference.
– D. A. Neville, Sci-Fi Author

★★★★★

Jackie is highly professional. Her comments and suggestions are well thought out.

She keeps the industry standards in mind, researches, and gives great advice to bring the work to its full potential, all without taking anything away from the author's vision.

Anyone needing editorial work should definitely contact Ground Crew Editorial!

– Karen Morgan, Children’s Book Author

★★★★★

The editors at Ground Crew helped bring my children’s book to the next level. They went way beyond any expectation, both with time and written feedback. I highly recommend!

– Christy Eiler Ward, Picture Book Author/Illustrator

★★★★★

I have worked with five editors, and Ariane’s feedback is the best I have received.

Ariane is a brilliant editor. She was able to literally read between the lines and determine the writing choices I made—it’s like she was in my head! She was able to tell me what is and isn’t working and made excellent suggestions for how to improve my manuscript.

The next time I write a novel, she’ll be the first editor I’m calling.

– Sean Neubert, Adult Sci-Fi Author

★★★★★

After working on my first novel off and on for eight years, I knew it was time to get some professional guidance. My developmental edit with Ground Crew Editorial exceeded my expectations! I’m not a professional writer nor do I have an English degree background, so getting a developmental edit was like having a master class for my own book.

Ariane met with me at the beginning of the project to understand my goals as well as to identify areas to focus her attention. She gave me a detailed check-in after the first week, which put me at ease while I awaited the feedback. I’m so pleased with the specific comments she left in the manuscript, but the real treasure is the editorial letter.

Ariane meticulously analyzed the character arcs, themes, and plot, as well as the worldbuilding and genre expectations of my novel. She provided ideas and actionable next steps to consider to make my story the best it can be.

This was the first time anyone had ever read my manuscript, so I was anxious awaiting the feedback. Ariane showcased my strengths while identifying areas of growth. We were able to meet at the end of the project as well. We discussed the story, gave me opportunities to ask questions, and helped me map out what to do next.

As a new writer, this whole experience has been incredibly valuable and well worth the investment. I can’t wait to work Ground Crew Editorial in the future.

– Kim Gerstenschlager, YA Sci-Fi Author

★★★★★

“Ariane is amazing! I was looking to get overall feedback on the main elements of my story and a few key character relationships.

She gave me such a constructive, helpful, thorough and thoughtful critique that I not only feel hopeful in my manuscript and sending it off to my agent, but also empowered now that I see what is working and not working in my story.

HIGHLY HIGHLY recommend and well worth every dime! And I will definitely be going to Ariane again!”

— Lindsay Eland

★★★★★

“I was interested in getting the grammar edited and obtaining some structural criticism on a short story, and Ariane's editing skills are both fast and in-depth.

Not only did she make grammatical edits, but she suggested some structural and pacing changes and presented me with a number of questions about the characters and the world they live in that I might want to address in the story itself, questions that readers might ask.

Ariane's in-depth analysis was one of the best things about her work.”

— J. C., Sci-Fi Short Story Author

★★★★★

“I have used multiple editors and Ariane was the best. Where she excelled was in story development and identifying gaps or weaknesses, particularly on the character reaction side.

I would highly recommend her as long as she can find time to edit for me in the future!”

– Bob A., Sci-Fi/Fantasy Author

★★★★★

“I wanted to have my manuscript checked before publishing my book. The best part of working with Jackie was competency, price, ease of communication, and willingness to assist when there were some challenges that presented themselves.”

– Chris R., Middle Grade Author

★★★★★

“Jackie was a delight to work with! She was very efficient, thorough and thoughtful while still allowing for my voice to shine.

She crafted a personalized letter that held meaningful comments and thought provoking questions that pushed me as a writer.

I would welcome the opportunity to work with her again in the future.”

– Deborah A., Picture Book Author

★★★★★

“Without Jackie I would not feel as excited and confident as I do with my story.

As a new writer, I was going into the unknown, and Jacqueline was able to guide me from the very beginning. With her thoughtful insight and kind suggestions, we were able to make a story that can be happily read by all audiences.

She has been a blessing to my story, and I could not have done it without her!”

– Tyler S., Picture Book Author

★★★★★

“Jackie is one of the most sensitive and astute editors that I know. She was extremely helpful to me not only through proofreading and catching punctuation or grammatical errors, but also in asking critical questions and helping flesh out the story in important ways.

Because of her insightful comments, the story became much more complete and seemed to become more true to itself in profound ways.

I would highly recommend her to anyone who wants a clear and nuanced edit of her writing.”

– Anne R., Kid Lit Author

★★★★★

“There are editors, and there is Ariane. If you are lucky enough to cross this lady’s path, look no further.

You’ll not find anyone better at their craft, nor anyone more of a joy to work with.

She is unerringly fair, patient, and professional. Her light touch and insightful ways put wings under my story.”

– Bjorn W., Philosophy/Fantasy Author